Friday, October 10, 2008

son of a witch

i would change candle, because she never talks to anyone and she's mechened a lot. she could say smipile sentatses and state her openeions so everyone knows she has something important to say she doesn't have to talk but she could say a few things. or she could say how she feels or when she needs help she could yell and get someone to come and help. this is how and why i would change candle.

2 comments:

jade said...

nice I would like to read that book.I would like to hear more

J. Pingrey said...

Interesting change that you would make. Can you give me some more background information about the book so I can better understand your suggestion?