i would change candle, because she never talks to anyone and she's mechened a lot. she could say smipile sentatses and state her openeions so everyone knows she has something important to say she doesn't have to talk but she could say a few things. or she could say how she feels or when she needs help she could yell and get someone to come and help. this is how and why i would change candle.
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nice I would like to read that book.I would like to hear more
Interesting change that you would make. Can you give me some more background information about the book so I can better understand your suggestion?
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